- Take your ideas out of the text, especially in your opening and closing paragraphs! This will make your work so much more interesting for your reader.
- Create an INTERESTING title that will attract readers. "Reading Response 12/18" is boring. Think of yourself as a headline writer for a newspaper.
- You should be commenting on your partner's work. Be specific and encouraging! Last cycle's all star commenter is Steven in 806!
- Check out the mentors that Ms. Warren and Ms. DePalma referenced in class for additional guidance.
These writers did a great job writing a fiction blog post. Check out a mentor or two from your class to see what you can emulate in your own writing.
Class 803
Claire
Leela
Zoe
Leonardo
Matt
Class 806
Michael
Najal
Zachary
Class 809
Rithika
Maxine
Angela
Josef
Zunayed
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